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author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2015-10-26 16:10:17 +0100 |
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committer | Daniel Mack <daniel@zonque.org> | 2016-01-28 11:13:17 +0100 |
commit | cd72d2044ad28b475bf84a38ba6db45292467dd8 (patch) | |
tree | fe6540b2a887d81c002d8aedfbc654d2d84ca2e7 | |
parent | man: try to repair some nonsensical paragraph (diff) | |
download | systemd-cd72d2044ad28b475bf84a38ba6db45292467dd8.tar.xz systemd-cd72d2044ad28b475bf84a38ba6db45292467dd8.zip |
doc: improved wording in some places
Avoid "mountpoint mounted" (word repetition),
"queriable" (no match in m-w.com and dict.cc).
-rw-r--r-- | man/file-hierarchy.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-escape.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-nspawn.xml | 4 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/systemd-path.xml | 2 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | man/sysusers.d.xml | 2 |
5 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/man/file-hierarchy.xml b/man/file-hierarchy.xml index 345c56cefa..538a592f8d 100644 --- a/man/file-hierarchy.xml +++ b/man/file-hierarchy.xml @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ and restrictions systemd makes on the file system hierarchy.</para> - <para>Many of the paths described here are queriable + <para>Many of the paths described here can be queried with the <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-path</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry> tool.</para> diff --git a/man/systemd-escape.xml b/man/systemd-escape.xml index 5407773f23..dbb3869a24 100644 --- a/man/systemd-escape.xml +++ b/man/systemd-escape.xml @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ used to escape and to undo escaping of strings.</para> <para>The command takes any number of strings on the command line, - and will process them individually, one after the other. It will + and will process them individually, one after another. It will output them separated by spaces to stdout.</para> <para>By default, this command will escape the strings passed, diff --git a/man/systemd-nspawn.xml b/man/systemd-nspawn.xml index a97b7c44eb..28b91dee24 100644 --- a/man/systemd-nspawn.xml +++ b/man/systemd-nspawn.xml @@ -770,8 +770,8 @@ <option>yes</option>, full volatile mode is enabled. This means the root directory is mounted as a mostly unpopulated <literal>tmpfs</literal> instance, and - <filename>/usr</filename> from the OS tree is mounted into it, - read-only (the system thus starts up with read-only OS + <filename>/usr</filename> from the OS tree is mounted into it + in read-only mode (the system thus starts up with read-only OS resources, but pristine state and configuration, any changes to the either are lost on shutdown). When the mode parameter is specified as <option>state</option>, the OS tree is diff --git a/man/systemd-path.xml b/man/systemd-path.xml index da6026e3b3..e2b23eec51 100644 --- a/man/systemd-path.xml +++ b/man/systemd-path.xml @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ <para><command>systemd-path</command> may be used to query system and user paths. The tool makes many of the paths described in <citerefentry><refentrytitle>file-hierarchy</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry> - queriable.</para> + available for querying.</para> <para>When invoked without arguments, a list of known paths and their current values is shown. When at least one argument is diff --git a/man/sysusers.d.xml b/man/sysusers.d.xml index 42b53b2759..18ee3800d6 100644 --- a/man/sysusers.d.xml +++ b/man/sysusers.d.xml @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ u root 0 "Superuser" /root</programlisting> <varlistentry> <term><varname>m</varname></term> <listitem><para>Add a user to a group. If the user or group - are not existing yet, they will be implicitly + do not exist yet, they will be implicitly created.</para></listitem> </varlistentry> |