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| author | Jason St. John <jstjohn@purdue.edu> | 2013-06-27 21:51:44 +0200 |
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| committer | Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl> | 2013-07-03 05:06:22 +0200 |
| commit | e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 (patch) | |
| tree | 8c40d1a1e527a09974839ac44a3b7b3d19232758 /man/systemd.preset.xml | |
| parent | hwdb: allow to query arbitrary keys (diff) | |
| download | systemd-e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76.tar.xz systemd-e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76.zip | |
man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages
Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.
To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.
[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
Diffstat (limited to 'man/systemd.preset.xml')
| -rw-r--r-- | man/systemd.preset.xml | 14 |
1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/man/systemd.preset.xml b/man/systemd.preset.xml index a692053876..1ba9272398 100644 --- a/man/systemd.preset.xml +++ b/man/systemd.preset.xml @@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ by default, <literal>disable</literal> to disable units by default.</para> - <para>If multiple lines apply to a unit name the + <para>If multiple lines apply to a unit name, the first matching one takes precedence over all others.</para> @@ -131,14 +131,14 @@ precedence over another file with an alphabetically earlier name, if both files contain lines that apply to the same unit names. It is recommended to prefix - all file names with two-digit number, to simplify + all filenames with two-digit number, to simplify ordering.</para> <para>If the administrator wants to disable a preset - file supplied by the vendor the recommended way is to + file supplied by the vendor, the recommended way is to place a symlink to <filename>/dev/null</filename> in <filename>/etc/systemd/system-preset/</filename> - bearing the same file name.</para> + bearing the same filename.</para> </refsect1> <refsect1> @@ -150,8 +150,8 @@ <programlisting>disable *</programlisting> </example> - <para>This disables all units. Due to the file name - prefix <literal>99-</literal> it will be read last and + <para>This disables all units. Due to the filename + prefix <literal>99-</literal>, it will be read last and hence can easily be overridden by spin or administrator preset policy or suchlike.</para> @@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ disable *</programlisting> <para>This enables three specific services and disables all others. This is useful for administrators to specifically select the units to enable, and - disable all others. Due to the file name prefix + disable all others. Due to the filename prefix <literal>00-</literal> it will be read early and hence overrides all other preset policy files.</para> </refsect1> |