From f23e83b156da8966e43e303dced5439503450d21 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>
Date: Mon, 4 Jan 2016 23:17:21 -0500
Subject: man/sd_event_{add_io,add_time,add_signal,now}: various small fixes
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- remove things which are clear from the context
- 0 is a valid descriptor number, hence "positive" → "non-negative"
- "positive" means greater than zero, hence "positive non-zero" → "positive"
- use oxford comma
- reword some things for clarity
---
 man/sd_event_now.xml | 35 +++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/sd_event_now.xml')

diff --git a/man/sd_event_now.xml b/man/sd_event_now.xml
index 58d7375eac..054aff3ac6 100644
--- a/man/sd_event_now.xml
+++ b/man/sd_event_now.xml
@@ -65,45 +65,44 @@
   <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>
 
-    <para><function>sd_event_now()</function> returns the timestamp
-    the most recent event loop iteration began. This timestamp is
-    taken right after returning from the event sleep, and before
+    <para><function>sd_event_now()</function> returns the time when
+    the most recent event loop iteration began. A timestamp
+    is taken right after returning from the event sleep, and before
     dispatching any event sources. The <parameter>event</parameter>
-    parameter takes the even loop object to retrieve the timestamp
+    parameter specifies the event loop object to retrieve the timestamp
     from. The <parameter>clock</parameter> parameter specifies the clock to
     retrieve the timestamp for, and is one of
-    <constant>CLOCK_REALTIME</constant> (or its equivalent
+    <constant>CLOCK_REALTIME</constant> (or equivalently
     <constant>CLOCK_REALTIME_ALARM</constant>),
-    <constant>CLOCK_MONOTONIC</constant> or
-    <constant>CLOCK_BOOTTIME</constant> (or its equivalent
-    <constant>CLOCK_BOOTTIME_ALARM</constant>), see <citerefentry
-    project='man-pages'><refentrytitle>clock_gettime</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>
+    <constant>CLOCK_MONOTONIC</constant>, or
+    <constant>CLOCK_BOOTTIME</constant> (or equivalently
+    <constant>CLOCK_BOOTTIME_ALARM</constant>), see
+    <citerefentry project='man-pages'><refentrytitle>clock_gettime</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>
     for more information on the various clocks. The retrieved
     timestamp is stored in the <parameter>usec</parameter> parameter,
     in µs since the clock's epoch. If this function is invoked before
-    the first event loop iteration the current time is returned, as
+    the first event loop iteration, the current time is returned, as
     reported by <function>clock_gettime()</function>. To distinguish
     this case from a regular invocation the return value will be
-    positive non-zero in this case, while it is zero when the returned
-    timestamp refers to the actual event loop iteration.</para>
+    positive, and zero when the returned timestamp refers to an actual
+    event loop iteration.</para>
   </refsect1>
 
   <refsect1>
     <title>Return Value</title>
 
     <para>If the first event loop iteration has not run yet
-    <function>sd_event_now()</function> returns the requested
-    timestamp in <parameter>usec</parameter> and returns a positive,
-    non-zero return value. Otherwise, on success it will return the
-    iteration's timestamp in <parameter>usec</parameter> and 0 as
-    return value. On failure, the call returns a negative errno-style
+    <function>sd_event_now()</function> writes current time to
+    <parameter>usec</parameter> and returns a positive return value.
+    Otherwise, it will write the requested timestamp to <parameter>usec</parameter>
+    and return 0. On failure, the call returns a negative errno-style
     error code.</para>
   </refsect1>
 
   <refsect1>
     <title>Errors</title>
 
-    <para>Returned errors may indicate the following problems:</para>
+    <para>Returned values may indicate the following problems:</para>
 
     <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
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