From e9dd9f9547350c7dc0473583b5c2228dc8f0ab76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Jason St. John" <jstjohn@purdue.edu>
Date: Thu, 27 Jun 2013 21:51:44 +0200
Subject: man: improve grammar and word formatting in numerous man pages

Use proper grammar, word usage, adjective hyphenation, commas,
capitalization, spelling, etc.

To improve readability, some run-on sentences or sentence fragments were
revised.

[zj: remove the space from 'file name', 'host name', and 'time zone'.]
---
 man/systemd-inhibit.xml | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'man/systemd-inhibit.xml')

diff --git a/man/systemd-inhibit.xml b/man/systemd-inhibit.xml
index 6f63c8c73e..de2f264147 100644
--- a/man/systemd-inhibit.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-inhibit.xml
@@ -101,8 +101,8 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><option>--what=</option></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Takes a colon
-                                separated list of one or more
+                                <listitem><para>Takes a colon-separated
+                                list of one or more
                                 operations to inhibit:
                                 <literal>shutdown</literal>,
                                 <literal>sleep</literal>,
@@ -124,9 +124,9 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><option>--who=</option></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Takes a short human
-                                readable descriptive string for the
-                                program taking the lock. If not passed
+                                <listitem><para>Takes a short,
+                                human-readable descriptive string for the
+                                program taking the lock. If not passed,
                                 defaults to the command line
                                 string.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -134,8 +134,8 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><option>--why=</option></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Takes a short human
-                                readable descriptive string for the
+                                <listitem><para>Takes a short,
+                                human-readable descriptive string for the
                                 reason for taking the lock. Defaults
                                 to "Unknown reason".</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
                                 <literal>delay</literal> is used, the
                                 lock can only delay the requested
                                 operations for a limited time. If the
-                                time elapses the lock is ignored and
+                                time elapses, the lock is ignored and
                                 the operation executed. The time limit
                                 may be specified in
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-logind.conf</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>. Note
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