Awkward phrasing.

git-svn-id: https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/httpd/httpd/trunk@918015 13f79535-47bb-0310-9956-ffa450edef68

8 files changed, 11 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.html.en b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.html.en
index 58a8a622ba..fec6a52754 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.html.en
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.html.en
@@ -445,7 +445,8 @@ of the daemon</td></tr>
     warnings about log file placement and <a href="../misc/security_tips.html#serverroot">security</a>.</p>
 
     <div class="note"><h3>Note</h3>
-      <p>As of Apache 2 it is recommended to use only the <code class="program"><a href="../programs/apachectl.html">apachectl</a></code> script for (re-)starting or stopping the server.</p>
+      <p>As of Apache 2, we recommended that you only use the <code class="program"><a href="../programs/apachectl.html">apachectl</a></code> script, or the init script that your OS provides,
+      for (re-)starting or stopping the server.</p>
     </div>
 
 </div>
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml
index 1ddd1ec777..2de8182c1a 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml
@@ -150,8 +150,9 @@ of the daemon</description>
     href="../misc/security_tips.html#serverroot">security</a>.</p>
 
     <note><title>Note</title>
-      <p>As of Apache 2 it is recommended to use only the <program>
-      apachectl</program> script for (re-)starting or stopping the server.</p>
+      <p>As of Apache 2, we recommended that you only use the <program>
+      apachectl</program> script, or the init script that your OS provides,
+      for (re-)starting or stopping the server.</p>
     </note>
 </usage>
 </directivesynopsis>
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.de b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.de
index cff7cb68da..9c8aba1107 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.de
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.de
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <!DOCTYPE modulesynopsis SYSTEM "../style/modulesynopsis.dtd">
 <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="../style/manual.de.xsl"?>
-<!-- English Revision: 151408:918003 (outdated) -->
+<!-- English Revision: 151408:918011 (outdated) -->
 
 <!--
  Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.ja b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.ja
index 7e0a4e3502..75d0fd2169 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.ja
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.ja
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8" ?>
 <!DOCTYPE modulesynopsis SYSTEM "../style/modulesynopsis.dtd">
 <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="../style/manual.ja.xsl"?>
-<!-- English Revision: 674934:918003 (outdated) -->
+<!-- English Revision: 674934:918011 (outdated) -->
 
 <!--
  Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.tr b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.tr
index 1a84b50710..e14bae43d8 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.tr
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.tr
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <!DOCTYPE modulesynopsis SYSTEM "../style/modulesynopsis.dtd">
 <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="../style/manual.tr.xsl"?>
-<!-- English Revision: 804678:918003 (outdated) -->
+<!-- English Revision: 804678:918011 (outdated) -->
 <!-- =====================================================
  Translated by: Nilgün Belma Bugüner <nilgun belgeler.org>
    Reviewed by: Orhan Berent <berent belgeler.org>
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.de b/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.de
index ce2271935c..0c8e425c43 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.de
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.de
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <!DOCTYPE modulesynopsis SYSTEM "../style/modulesynopsis.dtd">
 <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="../style/manual.de.xsl"?>
-<!-- English Revision: 420990:883878 (outdated) -->
+<!-- English Revision: 420990:918011 (outdated) -->
 
 <!--
  Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.ja b/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.ja
index 5fa0aa9398..6e706a481e 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.ja
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.ja
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8" ?>
 <!DOCTYPE modulesynopsis SYSTEM "../style/modulesynopsis.dtd">
 <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="../style/manual.ja.xsl"?>
-<!-- English Revision: 420990:883878 (outdated) -->
+<!-- English Revision: 420990:918011 (outdated) -->
 
 <!--
  Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.tr b/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.tr
index 205f802a49..dd5153c20d 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.tr
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/prefork.xml.tr
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <!DOCTYPE modulesynopsis SYSTEM "../style/modulesynopsis.dtd">
 <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="../style/manual.tr.xsl"?>
-<!-- English Revision: 713242:883878 (outdated) -->
+<!-- English Revision: 713242:918011 (outdated) -->
 <!-- =====================================================
  Translated by: Nilgün Belma Bugüner <nilgun belgeler.org>
    Reviewed by: Orhan Berent <berent belgeler.org>